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Published: Dec 22, 2013

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_{I really wanted to try mimicking the official Naruto style, and ohmygod it is the hardest style to work with, I have no idea how Masashi Kishimoto can draw like this every freaking day!
Anyway, another picture of Ren, who still doesn't have a surname, with a mini factfile and some textures slapped onto her.
I've decided the her little warpaint lines are going to be a permanent addition to her face, as I like them quite a bit.

I've requested a critique on this piece, as I want to get better at drawing people, so any feedback would be great! I know she's not looking that awesome, but I've only just started with people and I'm working on them slowly but surely!

Let me know what you think!

Ren (c) *Dekkii
Naruto (c) Masashi Kishimoto}

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Tempest-StormArtist

Dec 22, 2013

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The drawing is really great! It's almost exactly like when Masashi Kishimoto draws his characters in Naruto. All you need help with is the shining crown of the hair and the detail of the hair. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="

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(Smile)"/> But all the rest, it's really great. Just improve your skills of drawing/coloring the shining crown & the detail of the hair. I love your artwork, it's just amazing. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="

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(Smile)"/> Improve your artwork skills bit by bit, okay? It's a really good drawing and for the characteristics, I would add interests, most favorite food, least favorite food, and mission data. (I got that from Naruto's character book)